This is wonderful! I like your shading and colouring techniques. Try doing hair in actual strands, detail looks lovely in any art piece. Anatomy could use some work; to me the breasts seem rather large for her body
I must say that this describes near correct anatomy as in anime/manga. and moreover it has that characteristic reddening of the cheeks when something awkward has happened ( which is almost all the time in anime). A skillful approach, this shows much potential ... take care..
I think it might help to give more volume to her hips for balance. Widening her legs would also help, since they're not much larger than her arms, and that's not natural. The folds in the shirt are nice, but the pleats in her skirt are too repetitive. A few little adjustments will go a long way.
The shading is incredible! I'm still learning digital drawing, so this is very helpful in finding out new techniques. The creases and shadows on her dress are so detailed. I assume you sketched this out on paper first?
Ok now. I think this is not bad, but i do have some issues with it. 1. I do not quite understand the double lines around her boobs and upper body. are those seams? or some frills? I do not quite get it and it takes away from the othewise clean lines. 2. her head is a bit too sqare. she could use more roundness. 3. her hips are way too small - her shoulders are really wide and in comparison she shrinks the lower you get. 4. her stance is very static. a more dynamic pose yould be better! I like the shading on the sirt a lot though.
What stands out ost in thÝs is the shadowing which yu have made perfecly and i kinda like the top too maby just a little bit too many lines in some places, also the skirt looks kinda wierd and a little bit blank when you see it with that detailed top with it. Other then that it's great!
Nicely done! The clothing looks great, and the pose is cute. The first thing I noticed was her lack of ears - with her hair the way it is, they'd likely be able to be seen out the edges of the hair, so maybe adding more volume to the hair and making it thicker would help, there. Also, be careful of your lengths, as one side of the hair is longer than the other. Nice work on the shading, particularly on her shirt, but I'd like to see some deeper shading on the skirt, where the shading is barely visible. Her legs seem a little out of proportion to the rest of her - for a character with a longer torso and wide shoulders, bigger bust, etc, her legs ought to be thicker than that. Also, what are the lines on her bust, at the edges? It looks somewhat like you've not erased some lines, so if they're part of the design then you may need to differentiate them a little further from the usual lineart
Great attention to the details such as the creases in her clothes! Very neat outlining and smooth shading. I quite like her hairstyle (as I had that pixie cut once ) the only thing that needs fixing would be that the hair is slanting from the right (being shorter) to the left (being longer) and how the bump on top left needs to be leveled with the right side. Her face looks great! I just think her thighs look a bit off (perhaps a bit too small at the bottom in proportion to her body?) but that could just be me, overall amazing work!
nothing really wrong with the hair right now, but if you feel that you can do better, why not, right? you made this so clean and presentable, no unnecessary details are shown. good job! you have great skill in forming the face and the outfit as well. keep making great characters! _______________________________________________________ why not join a small contest for your OC? see below to win points!